If I use the term "freak that" in my WIP, will I get in trouble? I'm cleaning up my WIP for the Genesis Awards contest and I never saw the word before in a novel, but I don't want to disqualify myself. It's the best word to fit my character's response, but I don't know. Do you?
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I don't know Dee, but I'd be interested in finding out too. I say what the freak or what the frig and I know some think what I really mean is what the *!&^! But that ain't so. Neither do I agree that when I say gosh, I'm inadvertantly taking the Lord's name in vain.
I like freak. Maybe it depends on how you say it? Like I think no one would have a problem with you saying, she's a freak. But maybe my what the freak wouldn't freaking fly?
What's the age of the character saying it? Would "bump that" work instead, or is that too much like "freak that?"
Bump that might work better. Because she's not cursing, but saying forget it in a more intense way. Thanks, Lamonica and Gina.
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